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dynapink has said some really, really lovely things about my stories and also come up with a few interesting points and things to work on. This whole thing has been quite an eyeopener for me, and very, very rewarding.

In other news, I wrote 500 words of Master Plan at work today. Not, however, on the upcoming chapter, but way back on Chapter 2. Since I seem to be sticking a bit at writing Doctor/Master (I think I need to find time to read some more of other people's fics to get me back in the groove) I decided it's time to start working my way through the little changes that needed to be made earlier in the story. And the one big amendment, which is this: trying to make Jack's submission better signalled and his motivation more understandable - or at least make it a bit less sudden! I don't know if I'll be able to achieve this, but I'm having fun adding to this bit. It's very rough as yet so still a fair bit of work to do, but hopefully it'll make it a lot better in the long run.

This turned out to be a very interesting assignment for me. dynapink has written quite a lot of stories, but the only ones I knew enough to give feedback on were the new Doctor Who ones. And since dynapink obviously likes Doctor/Rose and I prefer Doctor/Jack (and slash in general), none of these were stories that I would normally read.

I did, however, enjoy them, and they made me look at the relationships between the characters in a different light, which was very interesting.

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