Here's the first of the commentaries people have requested, this one requested by aeron_lanart. Over here at my fic journal.

dune_drd, I have done the commentary on Lessons Learned but I'm sure I have more to say on that so I'm leaving it for a day or two more till I'm sure I've said everything I want to! donutsweeper, I shall probably do Not the One tomorrow. :-)

Nicked off dune_drd.

Post the first lines of fic you are yet to finish.

Good idea, this. Made me go through all the files and realise I have several drabbles and ficlets sitting there which, while not necessarily outstanding, are pretty much finished – so will be posting those at some point.

( Fic snippets here )

So that's all, folks!